Less is more!
Remove the sound that is audible in these parts: 00:22 - 00:44; 01:43 - 02:05; 02:13 - 03:15, and your song is perfect!
... but with everything on this planet, it can be improved even more. As I listened to your previous tracks you've uploaded, I can see that you've improved greatly. This specific song has the kind of depth to it that in my opinion is hard to achieve. What took me away from my trance-like feeling, though, was the incredibly annoying, repetitive sound introduced at 01:48. Personally, I would suggest you removing or changing that part. Anyways, good job!
'Amazing' underestimates this song so badly. . .
This could fit as background music when descending to heaven :D
As close to pure awesomeness as one can get!
Great you liked it, thanks!^^
A flowing momentum
You've captured a working 'flowing' effect throughout the song, with an unusual momentum. I like it!
You've captured the feeling on gets when listening to the original, but changed the song to a totally different genre. The faster pace works well with the sounds you chose ;)
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